Posts Tagged ‘headlines’

Phrases to avoid in headlines and ledes, part 294

It’s offical: Fev at “Headsup: The Blog” agrees with one of my previous admonitions.

Oh no, they didn’t!

The Gazette’s A1 hed on Wednesday, Nov. 5:

The Gazette’s sports section hed on Sunday, Nov. 9:

I already complained about Wednesday’s Obama hed. Reusing the hed — down to the exclamation point! — a second time this week doesn’t make it better.  As the ancient Chinese proverb goes: Cliché me once, shame on you; cliché [...]